This time we collaborated to compose a poem of couplets.

• If you were a poetry critic, what would you say about it?
• Other than your own, which is your favorite couplet?

Tweet your answer with the #4tl tag.

“Determination of Inspiration” (courtesy of @pandadollbaby)

maniactive:
Where do you search for inspiration?
The depths of despair, or the heights of elation?

Pandadollbaby:
The truth lies in our quest.
The effort exerted must be our best.

CharityHisle:
It’s not the time to idle in wait;
start today, we make our own fate

dragonblogger:
Body sluggish and inert,
thoughts conflict and invert

Christwitery:
Soft words blow, unspoken in my heart
incensed by broken promises, on my part

denthewise:
I was the one who left you there
Jilted, alone, it wasn’t fair

maniactive:
So much for finding inspiration in elation
Joyous recollections don’t seem part of the equation!

denthewise:
Turning about I face ahead
the future vibrant, the past is dead

Pandadollbaby:
Renew THE commitment, play by MY rules.
The truth is the key, THE proof we’re NOT fools.

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