Community Couplets: The final result – Determination of Inspiation
Tuesday, July 14th, 2009This time we collaborated to compose a poem of couplets.
- If you were a poetry critic, what would you say about it?
- Other than your own, which is your favorite couplet?
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“Determination of Inspiration” (courtesy of @pandadollbaby)
maniactive:
Where do you search for inspiration?
The depths of despair, or the heights of elation?
Pandadollbaby:
The truth lies in our quest.
The effort exerted must be our best.
CharityHisle:
It’s not the time to idle in wait;
start today, we make our own fate
dragonblogger:
Body sluggish and inert,
thoughts conflict and invert
Christwitery:
Soft words blow, unspoken in my heart
incensed by broken promises, on my part
denthewise:
I was the one who left you there
Jilted, alone, it wasn’t fair
maniactive:
So much for finding inspiration in elation
Joyous recollections don’t seem part of the equation!
denthewise:
Turning about I face ahead
the future vibrant, the past is dead
Pandadollbaby:
Renew THE commitment, play by MY rules.
The truth is the key, THE proof we’re NOT fools.

